I noticed the play on words immediately, nicely done.

In regards to daddy, we have done what we could. Their time here, is to live out miserably ever after. At least my father is, and he knows it without any remorse. So he he says, but I know this energy is just rotting from the inside out. Now, two years after his stroke, the anger is escalating.

" love will tear us apart" one of my favorite songs!